IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - ADV & DIS ADV - SRINATH REDDY

Some people think it is better for children to grow up in the city , while others think that life in the country side is more suitable for them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both places ? 

These days, growth of the children is playing a vital role where behaviour, attitude and discipline are main keys for a better life. Place and atmosphere where a child is grown can decide his/her good conduct, However, there's a huge difference in children who are grown up in cities compared to those of villages. I am going to discuss pros and cons on this in my write-up.

On the one hand, villages aren't updated like cities, the development in technology is one of the foremost requirements where rural areas can't relate. For instance, education system in municipalities include the usage of laptops, tabs and few electronic gadgets for the sake of better learning ,whereas, children in most of the villages do  not have the access to such kinds of gadgets owing to a variety of factors. Job opportunities are available in international level for infants studying in metropolis, whilst, most of them suffer from money crisis in villages due to less companies for employees to work.

On the flip side, cities lack fresh air, in contrast, villages do have lots of fresh air, due to polluted air in urban areas children get affected with various kinds of lung diseases. Fruits and veggies are injected with various kinds of chemicals for higher yield, in opposition to that, food in villages is organic and fresh which s healthier for children to consume. Youngsters intaking natural food have more immunity power where children in cities can't resist  to small illness.

To conclude,  the environment and food are eco-friendly which are the most important aspects. But the only thing is that there should be development in technology and children who are restricted to their houses must be be allowed to explore the things according to their wish and will, which  ensures quality living.

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