IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - DIRECT ESSAY - KUNAL MAHESHWARI

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Children in rural areas are being left in their academic development. Why is this being case? what solution can you suggest?

                                             

Youngsters of countryside always lag behind in their career growth. This essay aims to study possible reasons of this situation and also justifiable solutions to this problem.

 Firstly, this manifestation is due to less availability of resources which are essentially required to put forward every step in academic progress. For example, a lesser number of graduated teachers, little quantity of college preparatory school, and the obtainability of books are not so much as in the cities. Another detrimental factor is the poor management of the education system by the authorities, and this is because most of the education centers are lacking in teachers, practical labs, and other equipment. This demotivating factors push them down in their academic persuasion, so they flip their mind and start following the traditional routes of farming, harvesting, sowing, and irrigation, etc in order to support their family financially.

 In my opinion, some possible solutions to this problem are to ensure the accessibility of assets and improvements in the management of the education system. By standardizing the quality of pedagogues, maintaining the funds for the purchase  books, and keeping a check on real-time usage of laboratories. Furthermore, the supervision of the education department could be improved by cross-checking and monitoring the inward and outward flow of assets. For example, immediate recruitment must be done if any educator resigns from school or unavailability of teacher due to some reasons, so that students are able to engage with educators in educational activities and could be able to grasp a better knowledge of the subject.

To conclude, the ignorance of above-mentioned parameters have a drastic impact on educational growth of provincial youth. Nevertheless, this can be solved by standardization of teachers, ensuring the proper availability of funds for purchase of books and practical laboratories.

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