IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - AGREE/ DISAGREE - SHARASCHANDRIKA

Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

 To commence with , most of the celebrity's life is filled with hardwork, desire and audacious situations, but there are some celebrities who are well-known for their outer appearance and wealth. Some believe that this creates negative influence on younger generations. In this essay, I am going to shed some light on impact by these celebrities with  my opinion at the end.

 Celebrities are persons who influence people irrespective of age, some of them act as role models for younger generations and inspire and motivate them to  succeed in their life. If celebrities are well-known  for concrete things like money and beauty, then the  aspiring younger generations who are seeking them as role models may  fall in this trap of money and beauty which are not basic blocks for success. They may not succeed in life and this degrades their confidence level. 

 On the contrary, not all celebrities are known for their outer appearance or wealth. Some people are known as celebrities for their hardwork and audacious nature, who inspire  lot of people because of their attitude. These people  value the quote " Attitude is everything" and make young generations believe that under any burdensome situation, attitude helps them  to overcome it. For instance, Abdul Kalam, who came from a very poor background accomplished many things in his life and inspired whole nation by his nature.

 In conclusion, I strongly believe that not every famous person is influencing teenagers by beauty and wealth. There are some celebrities who influence people positively by their hardwork and set good examples for people.

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