IELTS WRITIBG TASK 2 - DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS - SHARASCHANDRIKA

Some people think that intelligence is innate, while others think we can improve our intelligence through learning. Discuss both sides and give your opinion?

Intelligence is measured by IQ. A person is more intelligent only when he has more IQ, although we can improve our IQ by working on it. Intelligent people can analyze spontaneously, think intellectually and their memory is also at a good standard. As every coin has 2 sides in the same way every argument has more than one opinion. Some people think intelligence is innate although many others think intelligence can be improved. In my subsequent paragraphs, I will explain both sides more broadly.

  Many people think intelligence is inborn and  children will get genes from their parents or ancestors. So if a person or his ancestor has a good IQ, it can be inherited by their children not only IQ but also many qualities can be inherited f om  Parents. If a person is a singer or a dancer then his or her child gets that talent from their parents and he/ she  can also be a marvelous singer. Similarly, I think IQ can be innate to people. These talents do not completely depend on heredity but also on the environment or surroundings they grow.


  A person can improve his IQ and  this is much more effective than the person who has born with intelligence. Everything in this world can be improved or developed by consistent work. Even a stone can be moulded into a beautiful sculpture when an artist does some considerable work on it. In the same way, learning new things on regular basis and handle situations or solve complex problems can improve our intelligence. We can also develop our creative skills by constantly working on them.

To conclude, intelligence can be improved by learning. The more you learn, the more intelligent you can be. Although intelligence can be innate it is much less when compared with people who improve their intelligence by consistent work. 


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