IELTS WRITING TASK2 - DIRECT ESSAY - ARAVIND REDDY PALLREDDY

More and more people are moving from rural areas to cities in search of a better life. But city life has its own problems.

What are the problems? And suggest some solutions. 

 

In this competitive contemporary world, more and more people are moving from rural to urban areas in order to find a better life. Yet, cities have their own issues. In this essay, I will analyze and pen down some relevant problems and solutions as well in the subsequent paragraphs.

 

To embark upon, it is obvious that issues in the cities are complicated. Firstly, the largest population in the cities lead to house shortage. For instance, in the big cities, many of the people reside in suburbs because the rents of housing in the cities are too high. As these people want to travel every day for their work purpose, here we can find the second problem- traffic congestion. Nowadays, traffic jams are a big concern for many cities. For instance, take Shanghai as an example, if a person wants to travel from the eastern side to the western side of Shanghai, it may take six or seven hours to travel on the road because of traffic congestion. The third is pollution, it seems that air, water, and sound pollution are the major concerns for cities compared to rural areas. And research has provided that overcrowded cities suffer even more from these issues because of large populations.

 

In addition, the solutions for the aforementioned issues should also be varied, in other words, the government should construct & gift the houses for the marginalized so that they can afford to live in the cities. For instance, the ruling administrations of Australian cities such as Adelaide and Perth have introduced a new scheme that provided housing in order to support low-income families. Furthermore, the government should improve transport infrastructure and manage the volume of traffic. To add to this, the government needs to conduct awareness programs on environmental problems and thereby individuals have a clear idea and understand how to protect the environment and where people in rural areas have more scope to live in cities in a sustainable way.

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