IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS - SATYA

Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.

Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

 

With the advancements in science and technology, it is more obvious that everything has become rudimentary in our life. Advertising the commodities in the mass media has become a bandwagon now-a-days which captivate us to get the products. Some pupils conception is that advertising the essential things, certainly,  aid in enhancing the profitability of the businesses, whereas, others keen  view is that  mass advertisements alone will not ascend the popularity of the products . Whether advertisements are requisite or evitable? I will pen down my viewpoints in the subsequent paragraphs and conclude with my opinion at the end in a detailed manner.

 

On one side of the coin,  If we want to analyse about any relevant information regarding the products which we aspire to buy, it is not primarily  pivotal that we have to access to the venue explicitly, in order to, know about its efficiency. In other words, owing to the humongous evolution of mass communications, specifically, advertisements attract the huge population, so as to, instantly improvise their sales graph. Furthermore, it is more evident that jazzier and joyful advertisements casted by the people who are in the limelight, undoubtedly, ignite the people’s mind invincibly, so that, incentivize them to buy the products, though, it is not more significant. In addition, mammoth personalities are engaged in this fraternity with regard to their livelihood.

 

On the flip side of the coin, it is impossible to judge the texture of the products deliberately just by observing them virtually, which in turn, results in some serious speculations. Moreover, it is a fallacious assertion that the stocks which are not advertised to a greater extent, probably, not the qualitative products to buy and resort to. For instance, organic compounds which are not fashioned in the televisions, indeed, are realistic in nature and pristine products. To supplement, goods which are highlighted in social networking systems can be, in turn, least efficacious comprised of ample adulterants.

 

In conclusion, in my vantage, advertisements can be utilized as a yardstick to appeal to the consumers, while, the stupendous standard of the commodities is the most worthy section which garners the customers to buy the products, even though, it does not glitter on the hands of the charismatic celebrities.